The Element of Structure in How Plays Work: It Is All About Time

The shape or structure of a play is equal to the story, and without the organization of the narrative into space and time, the meaning will be lost.  In David Edgar’s book, How Plays Work, he insightfully addresses the importance of structure and reveals why the plot is expressed through two structural categories:  Plays that are written in linear time and those who disrupt it.  While Edgar does not shift away from Aristotle’s belief that plot is paramount, and it must be composed of a beginning, middle and end, he does relay some varied approaches with the utilization of time and space in a refreshing and insightful way.

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Plays that are written in linear time do not necessarily mean that the writer is progressing from one action to another in a sequence of organized steps.  Edgar uses Oedipus as a great example of a story that uses non-chronological order, but “covers.”  According to Edgar, “Oedipus is an example of a play that is structured in real time.  His stage action is “linear.”  History emerges in bits and pieces as Oedipus discovers his identity and crimes, and all of this is revealed in non-chronological order.  For example, the beginning of the play, Oedipus, the king of Thebes wants to know how to end the plague that has come upon Thebes.  He is looking for a cure and sends his brother-in-law, Creon to the House of Apollo for some answers.  There is light at the end of the tunnel (or so it seems)!  Once the killer of the previous king, Laius, is found, the plague will be lifted.  Oedipus is on a mission to find the murderer and banish him forever.  “ Whoever among you knows the man wit was who murdered Laius, son of Labdacus, I order him to reveal it all to me.  And if the murderer’s afraid, I tell him to avoid the danger of the major charge by speaking out against himself.”

Irony plays a huge roll here, for the murder is Oedipus himself.  So, chronologically the murder has already happened, but Sophocles creates conflict by revealing Oedipus’ identity after the audience has already been made aware that he is the assassin.

By writing non-chronologically the author reveals present information in a powerful and objective way.  When writing s linear, a story will begin at point A and follow a time-progression that will take the characters to point B.  Edgar says, “There are plays which operate in a single time but move from place to place, with only the necessary movement of characters from A to B interrupting the continuous flow.”  Some plays operate in a single time cycle and only in one place, and this enlarges Aristotle’s ruling about time and place by increasing the play’s time beyond real time.  In other words, the time is both “defined” and “confined,” as in an evening or a single day.

It was very interesting to find that Arthur Miller’s original title for his famed play Death of a Salesman was, The Inside of His Head.  Taking into account the definition of “disrupted time,” which Edgar claims, “Is most developed in cinema,” and knowing that the plays action revolves around the protagonist (Willy Loman) sorting out so many unfulfilled dreams and failed realities, makes perfect sense.

Miller has taken a cinematic device and reminted it to demonstrate how it is not the past but our memory that informs our actions in the hear-and-now.  By making his ‘flashbacks’ a dramatization of a character’s present thought processes, Miller has made his mechanism authorially invisible as it’s possible for a non-naturalistic device to be.”

It is easy to see why non-linear structural forms work so well in screenplays.  The use of flashbacks, non-linear narratives, multiple shots, backwards and forwards, etc., all break away from the chronological three-act structure.  According to Edgar, “Cinema’s appropriation of the flashback from the novel gave twentieth-century theatre a whole new structural répertoire.”  Plays (screenplays) with disrupted time, where events happen in a non-chronological order utilize effects like flashbacks and backwards and forwards.  A wonderful example of the use of flashbacks is seen in the film, Groundhog Day.

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Since no one component alone builds a story, the utilization of open and closed structural elements that deal with time and space can broaden a writer’s options and bring greater depth to a story.  Edgar points out that there are some difficulties with real time.  One of those challenges is that, “You can’t avoid the naturalistic inconveniences of real life.”  By stretching time and place—“changing locations within or around a house or even a town reduces the impact of small changes in a single set, but opens up much greater opportunities for the setting to communicate meaning.”  This kind of structural format actually gets the audience to get involved.  They are able to examine the possibility of alternative plots.  “Moving some or all of the characters into a dramatically different environment and then moving them back again in the structural strategy most connected to a particular genre.”

While rudimentary guidelines still exist for the playwright and screenwriter, there is a lot more variance today.  The one-hero, three-act linear structure appears to be under revision.  Elements of structure have expanded, and what was once taboo, like:  flashbacks, backwards and forwards, non-linear narratives, multiple shots, etc. has disrupted the apple cart and given writers more creative options.

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4 thoughts on “The Element of Structure in How Plays Work: It Is All About Time

      • I have actually read and seen everything you talked about in this blog – Yeah, amazed me too! I’m not sure about the translation from play to screenplay with moving scenes in time to take it to film. It may be overdone now. What hasn’t been experimented with much is sequence in time. I recall two examples:

        1.) 12 Angry Men (1957) directed by Sidney Lumet. It’s a film almost totally continuous in time and works so well for that very reason.

        2.) Rope (1948) directed by Alfred Hitchcock. It was filmed with very few cuts (10 minutes at a time then as film allowed) so it ‘feels’ like real time.

        Well, just a couple examples off the top of my head of films adapted from plays. I agree with you in your headline – It’s all about Time! ‘Groundhog Day’ is a great use of non-linear time too. ‘Sliding Doors’ (an unfortunately forgotten film) uses time and space in non-linear ways. ‘Memento’ tells a story backwards from memories forgotten. It’s great to manipulate and so deceive and achieve, so to speak, but maybe we can bring back linear time again like the examples I mentioned. These are beyond real-time in linear ways and sequence-in-time is more accurate. Semantics or a subtle difference? I think the later. It’s not to stretch time and space (like it’s always something separate from people), but let the characters fill that up, and when that doesn’t work use visuals, sound and other means. 2001: A Space Odyssey is a very quiet, contemplative film and linear in time for the most part, then explodes at the end in non-linear time, off the chart visuals, crazy sounds and perplexing words. Yet, it works too!

        What’s my point? I think it’s your point too… No one element, or even two can translate a play or screenplay to the screen successfully. What is a perfect film? It doesn’t exist, just like the people who make the films (everyone involved). The film that comes closest to perfection for me is ‘On The Waterfront’. It’s just so human in the cast of characters and the story that binds them all together! That’s another theme in time isn’t it? It’s all in balance and how you do it. I don’t know, maybe time really doesn’t matter and it’s about how human it is in the end.

        As you say, no one component builds a story

  1. Thank you iSpocklogic for such a detailed and wonderful response! I vaguely remember the two films you cite as an example, and I will now have to find them and WATCH them! In fact, I’m not even sure if I’ve ever seen Hitchcock’s “Rope.”

    It really is all about time, and even timing. Comedy is certainly a genre where that is supremely important. “Groundhog Day” was brilliantly done. I’ve often watched that film and truly wondered how the writer pulled this off so perfectly. The beauty of the story is that it lets us (the audience) review our own existence. We are reminded of the routine of daily life amid challenging life circumstances, poor weather, etc., etc., and feeling stuck in a rut. This character is an exaggeration of ourselves, and certainly worse than ourselves, which is great for our own personal moral. The writer manipulates time and space to achieve a very impacting affect on the audience, and it WORKS so well!

    I do think you may be right about the “perfect film” not existing, and yet…there are those films (much like books) that work well, because they are just simply well-structured. Writers who can take a simple plot and bring fresh, current relevance to it, is probably going to have a winner. 🙂

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